Why telling Vi’s story matters
The early planning note explains the importance and difficulty of the subject, including a concern about falling into a cliché. It remains the writer’s stated concern rather than a requirement for how the scene must end.
From the writer’s notes
Vi is an important story, but a very very delicate one… I want to push the limits (cause 1A baby!) but I do want to write as if it’ll be consumed by mass media/fans… which means I can’t go hard core… Sin pushes limits, but that’s what he does, so it plays as schitck … but Vi, that’s a part of one’s self that most people don’t believe can be real… let alone “right” or “normal”… which makes the telling of the story that much more important to me… but I have to be delicate… sadly, as much as I hate it… I fear I’ll have to fall on the dagger of cliche: the gay guy gets used but he straight dude, then hung to dry… cause, well: straight guy.
The combined concept gives the investigative action and the personal aftermath a shared sequence.
From the writer’s notes
I just figured out the Gaze and Vi stories are the same… Gaze is sent in, but a Marine… on a base… in unfirom… he’s 6’9! he’s a size 16 boot!!! I am Vi0ut… and I’m being used, and not sexually… but in the way that happens when you want something so much you don’t see you’re being taken advantage of… and when Vi is here, and Vi is at the most UV he can be, then he’s going to be taken advantage of…. but at least Gaze gets the goods in the end (so story arc: Gaze on a mission, ill met Marine, Vi on his knees… then close to Grey… but a White flash back to Gaze will make it MINE!!! And the fuckers boots too!!! And his whole kit!!! The last panel is the Marine waking up, having been knocked out (Gaze can be mean, too) waking up to a room inspection… only to find he only has the stupid white tee and ugly ass boxers Gaze left him in (he of course took the good stuff: all the gear, dude was a baseball player: bonus gear!, all his military kit hehe… guess he got some demerits that day, huh… wait till they realize his guns and shit are gone too… Gaze left what he knew no shade of Specs would be interested in lol… and took the rest, either for spite or for hue. That night, again, flashing Grey for just a moment, Graze appears and takes out the boots and sets them on the bed and sets beside them as Vi appears, looks at the boots, licks his lips, and turns off the light. “You live with what you can get sometimes”
Rights, information, and “MINE”
Gaze’s attitude connects the information he takes to the civil-rights action.
From the writer’s notes
OOH!!! Gaze! Yes!!! to the readers who don’t read more, this is just a cival rights action… Gaze says MINE to those, too…. If the governement won’t release them, Gaze can get them and release them (well, copies… MINE!)… Specs isn’t affiliated with any big “team”… no forced, implied, or expected morals here - Specs is a free agent! And Agent Orange 2.0 just logged in!!!
Journal pages and the descending transition
The possibility of occasional journal pages accompanies the visual idea for a slide. The movement passes downward and reveals Vi’s head already bowed.
From the writer’s notes
I’m so tempted to rethink when the journaling starts… I like the idea of occsioanlly (in comic form anyway) seeing things like that written in the journal and in the frame, off to the side, we see the page entry …
In the DCAU-style crown-down change, most hues can appear without a change in pose. With Vi0ut, the effect passes the head and reveals it already down. In the later scene with Guy, the descending shimmer crosses empty space until it reaches him kneeling.
The image moves from eye contact to that lowered head without showing a bow. When Vi looks up and speaks, the change becomes especially striking. The earlier refusal to demonstrate UV on Oa comes from Specs already knowing how strongly someone’s presence can draw him into this state.
Breakfast: Joy through the Grey
The mushroom omelets begin with an irony: things associated with The Rot and The Grey bring Joy when shared. The opening concept also supplies Gaze’s research scene.
From the writer’s notes
okay, so S4… hear about a thing happening in the news, maybe over breakfast that morning “Forager made omelets with the mushrooms from the swamp… they do make Forager smile” (writers note: this is an irony play: mushrooms/The Rot/The Grey is bringing Joy via being shared)
Gaze takes over! Mission hunt, start by hacking from here… “Spectrum, you appear to be familiar with this process” “YES! MINE!” snaps Gaze, quickly sliding to IndiKid, the Orange Light Computer still being projected, the orange trinket bag with Gaze’s collected broken power rings a glowing “Sorry, I get a little hyper focused on what I want sometimes… I … did some research …sigh back when I first started turning into a disco ball”
Finishing up the data search, Gaze “GOT IT! I’m Out!” Gaze flies quickly right through a near by wall, phasing through it, leaving Forager and Halo in the kitchen “Forager did not know a lantern could to that” “Neither did a Halo. But, he did say that he can have one track mind when he wants something sometimes, yes?” Forager and Halo offer each other a look that says, without saying “I don’t always get humans”
Gaze, moving faster than orange should move, has found his target: the base!
The initial ending concept develops the lamp, the change to StarS, the darkening crystal, and the return to Vi. Its question about physical UV behavior is part of the visual exploration.
From the writer’s notes
lets expand the ending a little while its on my mind… We can assume we’re in the temp housing forged by StarS… the “light” that we have to turn off, is a glowing Star Sapphire crystal (like the rest of the small space, except the very comfy bed), the one on the crystal made bed stand, the one serving as the light, can be turned off by either IndiKid or StarS… so.. the looking at the boots… slide to StarS to reach over and turn off the light (touch it and make it dim to solid black)… then Vi (a reminder, Vi has a blindfold, the key at the back… these are constructs … which means… the room lights up with UV light, little glows, the color of the crystals becomes matte, something that happens when some crystals are exposed to UV light (fact check me on that)… the boots reflect the light a little) and then the line.
Love around him in the dark
The intended image is mostly darkness, with small reflected glows and the opaque blindfold defining Vi’s presence.
From the writer’s notes
the point of that is I want it to still feel mostly dark, with little repsondding to the UV other than the bed, some specs on the grass (cause StarS wouldn’t have made a floor when they could safely”walk bare foot outside!!! I’m southern, honey!“) and what’s bouncing off the boots… but this is also to give that striking moment: not totally dark, bit close, litteraly surrounded by a manifestation of love, with the blidfold glowing, no eyes visible, it’s not a construct you can see through, but it’s not like the cotton like clothing Vi wears, it’s real, but glows… and here you see that flat line or UV blidfold, that collar glowing lighting the head, and behind the small glow of the key relfecting a spot on the wall behind…
Vi0ut’s empathy and visibility
The character notes explore what his connection lets another person reveal or withhold. The familiar term for the decreasing state is “going sub.”
From the writer’s notes
I had forgotten about the fading stronger the stronger the male inspiring… this is a great example of more things I know: he can, and has been Vi before and can get there… when he’s… Gentleman’s Time! Lol (if that’s not in my cannon already, then see: United States of Tara’s husband in the shower) - so, if he were say, home alone, and “reading” … alone… he might slip into that… the point is, it’s not Was, he’s in control (he knows he has chain and rope constructs normally)… and he knows he can spot a dude who brings it on, but how strongly is a different story… that’s why it would have been nice to know that open eyes is a sign (remember, Specs is connected and knows more than he knows, that’s an example eof how empathy plus that alters his mechanics… and why testing was is important.. -Another writer note on Vi - if Guy wanted to be seen, he’d have been seen; had Guy wanted to bring along another and wanted them to be seen, but nothing else, or everything except Guy, then that’s how it’d happen - again, empathy plus connected = auto-adapting presentation, which is part of Vi’s whole thing
Gaze’s pockets after an encounter
Gaze supplies the pocket space for what remains after Vi’s encounters. The boots and sneakers shown are only the few known examples; the number of other items in those pockets is unspecified.